Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的英語(yǔ)作文，介紹你在新學(xué)校的校園生活。

新學(xué)校	校園很大很美，有操場(chǎng)、花園、閱覽室等 從周一到周五上課，課堂有趣，學(xué)到很多 希望帶好朋友來(lái)新學(xué)校參觀
業(yè)余生活	熱愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)和繪畫(huà) 是藝術(shù)俱樂(lè)部的成員
補(bǔ)充	還有很多有趣的事情 ……（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1、字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60字，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名等信息。

2、文中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

Now I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. ________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Now I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I have a beautiful school.In my new school,it is very large.There is a playground,a garden and reading room.My teaching building has four floors.My classroom is on the third floor.It is big and clean.On the first floor is a library,and there are many books in it.But I do not often read books inside.My teachers are very good.Students are smart .We have classes from Monday to Friday.The classes are interesting and we learn a lot.I hope you will take some friends to visit my school.I enjoy sports and drawing.I am a member of the art club.I have other interesting things in my school.

I am very happy in my school.I like my school.

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要介紹新學(xué)校的校園生活。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如beautiful, large, big, clean, library, inside, smart, interesting, a lot, enjoy以及member等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。