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【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著“爸爸去哪兒?”等綜藝節(jié)目的播出，人們越來越意識(shí)到爸爸對(duì)孩子成長的重要作用。根據(jù)近期你校對(duì)本校學(xué)生的調(diào)查，統(tǒng)計(jì)出孩子心目中好爸爸的三大優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容，以“What makes a good father?”為題，用英文寫一篇短文。

好爸爸的品質(zhì)	百分比	理 由
1. 多花時(shí)間陪孩子	52%	感受到父愛。
2. 以身作則	27%	為孩子樹立表率，教會(huì)他們誠實(shí)、勇敢。
3. 經(jīng)常贊美孩子	14%	給孩子的一個(gè)微笑也是對(duì)孩子的贊賞。
請(qǐng)給出2條你認(rèn)為好爸爸應(yīng)具有的其他品質(zhì)，并加以說明。

【寫作要求】

1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；

2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名。

What makes a good father?

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have.

Answer 1

【答案】

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have. 52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children. In this way they’ll feel their father’s love. 27% of the students believe a good father is a good example. He can teach his children to be honest and braver. 14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also suggest his praise.

In my opinion, a good father is also a patient teacher. A good father will listen to his children and give them suggestions if necessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文應(yīng)可以用第三人稱，一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。作者靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文敘述條理清晰，行文流暢。語言豐富，句式多樣；如：spend...with..., teach sb. to do sth., in one’s opinion等；使用了賓語從句，原因狀語從句，條件狀語從句等句型。發(fā)揮恰當(dāng)，效果不錯(cuò)。