Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作。

假如你是劉東，你打算在寒假里做一些有意義的事，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，給你的筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封郵件，談?wù)勀愕拇蛩恪?/span>

要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 行文流暢、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. For this holiday, I plan to________________

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All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. I have many plans. For this holiday, I plan to do some shopping to buy my favorite fruits and snacks. Because the Spring Festival is coming, I will prepare some delicious food and beautiful clothes to enjoy the festival. And I will buy some presents for my parents. I plan to visit my friends and watch TV, especially the shows I like best. Above all, I will read some famous works to enrich my horizon. It must be interesting and meaningful.

How are you spending your winter holiday? Please write to me soon.

All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，劉東寫(xiě)信給湯姆介紹自己寒假的計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I plan to..., I will…,It must be…,How are you…?等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了寒假將至，自己有很多計(jì)劃，接下來(lái)介紹我的具體計(jì)劃：購(gòu)物，準(zhǔn)備美食過(guò)春節(jié)，看望朋友，看電視，讀書(shū)，最后詢(xún)問(wèn)湯姆的寒假計(jì)劃。此處plan to do sth, do some shopping, buy sth for sb, above all等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。