Question

根據(jù)以下有關(guān)Alan 的個(gè)人情況的介紹， 用英文寫(xiě)一篇介紹他的短文。詞數(shù)： 80 左右。

Name: Alan Brown

Age : 16

Appearance: tall , round face, short hair

Personality: generous , humorous

Address : 69 Park Road, Sydney; live with his parents

School: No. 4 High School

Nationality ( 國(guó)籍 )： Australian

Occupation ( 職業(yè) ) ： student

Favourite subjects: Art, Music

Weekday activities ( 活動(dòng) ) ： swimming and walking

Usual Saturday activity : having parties

Usual Sunday activity : watching TV

His dream: be a social worker

 

Answer 1

【答案】

        

Alan Brown is an Australian student at the age of 16 in the No. 4 High School. Before he came to China, He lived with his parents at 69 Park Road, Sydney. He is tall and has a round face and short hair. He is so generous and humorous that we all like him. His favourite subjects are Art, and Music. His dream is to be a social worker. During weekdays, he often goes swimming and walks with his friends after school.He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫(xiě)Alan Brown的年齡、外貌、性格、愛(ài)好以及他的日�；顒�(dòng)。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短詞為文章增色不少，例如at the age of，during weekdays,go swimming, after school ,make friends , on Saturday ,on Sunday 等短語(yǔ)；運(yùn)用了不定式做表語(yǔ)，如His dream is to be a social worker；運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句，如 Before he came to China; 運(yùn)用了并列句，如He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays 。文章整體內(nèi)容飽滿，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。