Question

假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，給美國的筆友David寫一封80字左右的信，介紹你校畢業(yè)班的學(xué)習(xí)情況。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

還有一個(gè)月要畢業(yè)了，同學(xué)們都致力于刻苦學(xué)習(xí)各門功課。

老師對(duì)學(xué)生既友好又嚴(yán)格要求，一些學(xué)生因考試而壓力大。

青少年輔導(dǎo)員建議我們要?jiǎng)谝萁Y(jié)合，不要熬夜。

老師鼓勵(lì)我們使用橙色，因?yàn)樗�能帶來成功和使人振奮。

我覺得對(duì)學(xué)生來說適當(dāng)放松自己是必要的，比如………

注意：1.文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫。

      2.第5點(diǎn)作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

      3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.                              

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

Can you offer me some advice ? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.，so all the students are busy studying hard sons. Our teachers are very strict with us and very kind to us as well. Some of us are almost stressed out because of the coming examination. The Youngth Counsellor advises us to combine work with rest and not to stay up late.  Our teachers encourage us to use orange because it can bring us success and cheer us up. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly, such as taking a walk after supper, playing basketball sometimes and so on.

Can you offer me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹畢業(yè)班學(xué)習(xí)情況的文章。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章使用了一些固定句型和短語如encourage sb to do sth，it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly等等，這些都為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。