Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)
這學(xué)期，我校宣布了一條新的校規(guī)，即不允許學(xué)生帶手機(jī)來學(xué)校。有些人贊成，有些人反對，請你談?wù)勀愕挠^點，內(nèi)容包括：
1). 你覺得這條新校規(guī)好還是不好？
2). 陳述你的理由（至少兩點）；
3). 提醒大家用正確的方法使用手機(jī)。
作文要求：
1). 文字通順，語言連貫，書面整潔；
2). 80詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
This term, our school has a new rule that students mustn't bring their mobile phones to school.

Answer 1

【答案】This term，our school has a new rule that students mustn't bring their mobile phone to school.

I totally agree (I think this new rule is good for us).

Firstly， many students use their mobile phones to chat or play games all the time and even in class. It's bad for our study. Secondly， if you really have something important and want to call your parents， you can ask your teachers for help. They're always ready to help you， so there's no need to bring the mobile phones to school.

All in all， our school makes rules to help us and we should obey them. Don't bring your mobile phones to school and remember to use your mobile phone in a right way.

【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于校規(guī)不允許帶手機(jī)的問題，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示，確定文章的中心。注意人稱和時態(tài)。
一. 寫作步驟：
1.明確寫作目的。開頭已給出。
2.第二段作者贊成觀點new rule is good for us
3.第三段陳述手機(jī)不利的理由，使用順序副詞Firstly.......Secondly........so
4.總結(jié)All in all， our school makes rules to help us，作者緊扣觀點新校規(guī)是為了幫助我們。接著提醒大家正確使用手機(jī)
二. 根據(jù)要點，寫出關(guān)鍵詞，短語和句子。
三. 連詞成句，連句成篇，盡量使用熟悉句型，使用簡單句式，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。