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　　Anna收到Eve的來信。請根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容幫助Anna給Eve寫一封回信。(不少于60字)

Dear Anna,

　　I have a problem, and I need your help．I have a twin sister, Kate, and we are getting on well．But she likes music．She always plays her CDs too loud when I am doing homework．Also, she always borrows my things and doesn't return them．Last Sunday, she borrowed my English book and hasn't returned it to me yet．I argued with her yesterday．

　　What should I do? Could you please give me some advice?

Yours,

Eve

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各檔次的給分范圍和要求： 　　第四檔(很好)：(9－10分)完全完成了試題規(guī)定的要求，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，沒有語法和詞匯錯誤，具備較強的語言運用能力，完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 　　第三檔(好)：(5－8分)完成了試題規(guī)定的要求，應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足題目的要求，基本沒有語法和詞匯錯誤，達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 　　第二檔(一般)：(3－4分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的要求，未描述清楚，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，有語法和詞匯錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解，信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。 　　第一檔(差)：(1－2分)未完成試題規(guī)定的要求，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項目有限，有較多語法和詞匯錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解，信息未能傳達給讀者。 　　(0分)未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容極少，無法評判，寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。 　　范文： Dear Eve： 　　Don't worry．There are a lot of things you could do．First, you could have a talk with her．Tell her that you don't like doing homework with the music on．If she doesn't like to turn off the music, then you could ask her to turn down the music．And second, don't lend your things to your cousin next time．And maybe you could ask her parents for help．If she lost her book, ask her parents to buy one for her．I hope you will be happy again． Yours, Anna