Question

【題目】（題文）根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容，描述一下Mr. and Ms. Green家里發(fā)生了什么。

參考詞匯：burglar n. 竊賊 steal (stole, stolen) v. 偷

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Answer 1

【答案】【參考范文】

One night, Mr. and Ms. Green were sleeping. So was their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up. He fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.

【解析】試題分析：1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細節(jié)。

（2）結合提示詞，明確考查意圖。根據(jù)提示，選擇正確的時態(tài)，運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型，作適當展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達出畫面的意思了。

（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。

（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。

（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致，句子的語序和表達是否符合英文習慣等，盡量減少錯誤。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。時態(tài)運用正確，內(nèi)容要點完整、應用詞匯靈活準確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，上下文連貫，字數(shù)符合要求。