【題目】書面表達

假設(shè)你的好友叫Julie。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇短文。

Julie 最愛紅色。當(dāng)她猶豫不決的時候，紅色可以使她更易于采取行動。

她最喜歡看西方導(dǎo)演執(zhí)導(dǎo)的電影。去年她每天花1個半小時看電視，學(xué)業(yè)上出現(xiàn)了問題。

現(xiàn)在她更重視上課認(rèn)真聽講。學(xué)業(yè)上已經(jīng)取得了很大的進步。

她的夢想是當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生，…….

注意事項：

短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫。

第四點必須使用2-3句展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

詞數(shù)80個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Julie likes red best.

【答案】

Julie likes red best. When she is hesitant, red can make it easier for her to take action. She likes to watch movies that directed by western directors. Last year, she spent one and a half hours watching TV every day. It got in the way of her studies. Now she pays more attention to listen carefully. Great progress has been made in her studies. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up. In this way, she can help more people realize their dreams.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，來介紹一下自己的好朋友Julie。題目中有關(guān)于Julie的具體信息，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來。這些信息包括了Julie喜歡的顏色、電影、學(xué)習(xí)狀況以及夢想等，寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且這些關(guān)于介紹人物時所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了自己的好朋友Julie，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。而且作者在寫作時，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達，這一點很好。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強了文章的連貫性。如動詞不定式She likes to watch movies that directed by western directors.、介詞短語It got in the way of her studies.、連詞When she is hesitant, red can make it easier for her to take action.等。

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