Question

【題目】書面表達

假如鋼琴家(pianist)李云迪是你的偶像，請根據(jù)提示，以My Hero為題寫一篇短文，90詞左右，短文內(nèi)容必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)。

出生年份及地點	1982年，中國中部	才能	有音樂天賦；熱愛天籟之音
學(xué)習(xí)歷程	4歲開始學(xué)習(xí)拉手風(fēng)琴(accordion)； 7歲開始對鋼琴感興趣，每天苦練； 2001年去德國繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)；
成就	在全世界舉辦過許多音樂會；許多國際藝術(shù)節(jié)邀請他彈奏鋼琴； 贏得了全世界的高度贊揚
你的愿望	……(至少兩點)

My Hero

I am a music fan and the sounds of music are my favorite. Of all the pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hero

I am a music fan and piano music is my favourite. Of all the Chinese pianists, Li Yundi is my hero. He was born in central China in 1982. As a young boy, he could sing some difficult songs. He began to learn to play the accordion at the age of four. When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano. Since then, he has practised it hard every day. Sometimes he enjoyed himself in the music world so much that he forgot to have meals. He finished first in several international competitions. He has held lots of concerts around the world.

My dream is to talk with him about his music. I hope it can come true some day.

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要注意動詞單三形式和過去式的運用。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：文中用到了一些好的句型如：When he was seven years old, he showed an interest in playing the piano；My dream is to talk with him about his music.給文章增色不少。