Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文提示和英文內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。假如你是John,今天你在網(wǎng)上看到了下面的帖子。請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愕慕?jīng)歷或看法，并針對(duì)作者的困惑提出一些建議(不少于三條)。

注意：不要寫(xiě)出真實(shí)校名和姓名。

　　Post：Re：“What shall I do?”

　　Posted by John on 6/May/09

　　Dear Madam,

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One possible version： 　　Dear Madam, 　　I'm sorry to know that you have SO much trouble with your daughter, and I don’t think 8he should always play computer games．But don’t worry．You can ask her teacher for help Or you can invite some of her friends to have a word with her．You’d better encourage her to find out that spending too much time 011-computer games is bad for her health and studies．Try to encourage her to do other things instead of playing computer games．What’s more, as her mother, you should learn 　　something about computer games so that you and your daughter may have something to talk about．Besides, you may find some topics that your daughter is interested in, and then she may talk with you．Don't lose heart．It win be all right． John 　　書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 　　第一檔：(15－13分) 　　完全符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整、豐富，思想健康、積極向上。能夠使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。 第二檔：(12－9分) 　　基本符合題目要求，內(nèi)容基本完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。雖然有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。 第三檔：(8－5分) 　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，表達(dá)不夠清楚，影響整體理解。 　　第四檔：(4－0分) 　　與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，只能簡(jiǎn)單拼湊一些詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。