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【題目】書面表達(dá)

如何減壓讓生活更美好

情景設(shè)定：許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享, 內(nèi)容包括:

(1) 同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;

(2) 我的壓力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的；

(4) 詞數(shù)80~100。

Answer 1

【答案】

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

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