Question

【題目】Writing (作文):

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "How to Celebrate Graduation."（以“如何慶祝畢業(yè)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）

Situation:臨近畢業(yè),班里的同學(xué)們打算舉行一次畢業(yè)慶�；顒�(dòng)，他們?cè)谟懻撜骷瘧c�；顒�(dòng)的建議。以"How to Celebrate Graduation"為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh并陳述理由。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Celebrate Graduation.

I’m very happy to tell you the ways that we celebrate our graduation.

The most common way is to treat our teachers, relatives and friends to a big dinner, during which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. It’s a great way to promote our relations. But it usually costs a lot, which we can’t afford. Some others plan to have a trip to celebrate it. Though it helps us broaden our horizons, we’ll be very tired, especially after a hard process of preparing for the college entrance examination.

In my opinion, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our parents. In this way, we express our thanks to them in return for their love, care and support in our school life.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。