Question

【題目】書面表達。

某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為How to keep good relationship(關(guān)系) with parents的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文參加此次活動:

1.父母規(guī)矩太多、過于強調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績、不理解自己等問題；

2. 你對這些問題的看法；

3. 你與父母保待良好關(guān)系的做法。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)：80-100；

2.可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

3.文中不要出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。

How to keep good relationship with parents

Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. I think all these rules are too strict.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料比較詳細，提示調(diào)理清晰，我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文要注意人稱的變化，時態(tài)的搭配以及主謂一致，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上注意使用多種句式，同時還使用了表示次序的連接詞，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。此外，一些常用短語如：allow sb. to do, pay attention to, try one’s best to do, in order to 等短語的使用，使文章內(nèi)容更為豐富。