Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。

你的同學(xué)劉芳樂于助人(helpful), 積極樂觀(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中幫助了一位受傷的老人。請根據(jù)題示，用英語寫一篇短文向英語報(bào)English Times 投稿，簡要敘述她做好事的經(jīng)過, 并談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/span>

注意:(1)短文須包括上述全部要點(diǎn), 應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

(2)詞數(shù):100左右。短文開頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was OK, she left for school.

Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇記敘文，記敘文包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件，首先敘述做好事的經(jīng)過，將對此好事表明自己的感情提升為要點(diǎn)，更為重要進(jìn)行闡述，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如When everything was OK, she left for school.；it is our duty to help people in need.等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。