Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

初中畢業(yè)在即，高中新生活即將開始，學(xué)生社團(tuán)也即將開始拓荒，紛紛招募人才。假設(shè)你是社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和要求寫一篇80—100詞的英語宣傳稿，為新同學(xué)介紹下列社團(tuán)的情況(包括名稱、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及其目的)。

注慈：

1．自擬第四個(gè)社團(tuán)，包括名稱、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及其目的，不少于2句；

2．語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4．詞數(shù)80一100，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Welcome to Our Clubs!

Boys and girls．welcome to our schoo1．Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you．__________________________________________________________________________

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These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us．

Answer 1

【答案】

Welcome to our Clubs!

Boys and girls, welcome to our school. Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you.

Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body and watch sports matches. If you are interested in English, English Lovers is a good choice. In the club, you can speak to foreigners and talk about good ways to learn English. I hope you can make friends with other English lovers.

Do you want to be a good cook? In Excellent Cooks, you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes, which can lead to a healthy life. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.

These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以學(xué)校社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人的身份，在新學(xué)期開始的時(shí)候，為新同學(xué)們介紹一下各個(gè)社團(tuán)的情況，題目中給出了我們?nèi)齻�(gè)社團(tuán)Cool Player, English lover和Excellent cooks，還給出了這幾個(gè)社團(tuán)的一些基本情況，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。另外我們還需要自己補(bǔ)充第四個(gè)社團(tuán)的名稱和它的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及目的，這就需要我們自己發(fā)揮想象力來完成這一部分的內(nèi)容。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第二人稱you來敘述。寫作時(shí)，要注意表達(dá)合乎英語的規(guī)范，注意語句之間的連接，盡量使用一些好的詞匯、句型和短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力，使文章意思更加連貫，表達(dá)更加流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。短文中作者按照題目的要求給我們介紹了學(xué)校的三個(gè)社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，又發(fā)揮想象力補(bǔ)充了第四個(gè)社團(tuán)Smart Readers,內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語句通順，符合題目要求。短文中作者使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式表達(dá)符合英語的規(guī)范。作者還使用了一些較好的句型和句式，如if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，If you are interested in English、If you are interested in books等；還用到了一些較好的短語，如a good choice for sports lovers、Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body、talk about good ways to learn English、you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes、Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes等。這些句型的使用從整體上提高了作文的檔次，顯示了作者較高的寫作能力。