Question

【題目】書面表達

初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學習生活, 你一定有成功的體驗, 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演......

請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。

提示：(1)What was the event?

(2)How did you make it?

(3)What’s your feeling?

要求：(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內容, 可適當發(fā)揮。

(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。

(3)詞數(shù)80個左右(開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù))。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win

Hello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應包括以下內容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時學生們應根據這幾個內容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內容補充完整，用正確的英語表達出來。短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內容，不能遺漏要點，可以根據表達需要適當發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，選擇適當句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。句式結構可以簡單句為主，穿插并列句或復合句。為提升文章檔次，應注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復雜結構的使用。