Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是班長，學(xué)期結(jié)束時你要給同學(xué)作簡短的評價。你班的李華這個學(xué)期變化很大，請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇簡評。

過去	功課不好，常與同學(xué)爭吵，垃圾被他撒的滿地都是，課桌總是一團(tuán)糟。
現(xiàn)在	自從老師和他溝通后，有了很大變化。（學(xué)習(xí)、與同學(xué)相處、生活……）
結(jié)果	父母、老師對他滿意多了。
希望	……

要求：

1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.括號部分須用3、4句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

4.語氣通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

5.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。

This term, Li Hua has changed a lot.

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Answer 1

【答案】

This term, Li Hua has changed a lot. In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.

【解析】

試題分析：本文不難寫，對于作文的寫作要注意詳略得當(dāng)，學(xué)生在平時的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個好處的句型。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文的寫作對李華的過去的情況進(jìn)行描寫，不擅長于功課he didn’t do well in his subjects.與朋友吵架quarreled with his classmates. 垃圾被他撒的滿地都是Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. 課桌總是一團(tuán)糟His desk was always in a mess.然后對他現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫，如與同學(xué)能很好的相處gets along well with his classmates.等，再對現(xiàn)在的結(jié)果是父母、老師對他很滿意His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.