Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你是福州一所名校的學(xué)生，很多人想與你交流學(xué)習(xí)方法，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容寫一個(gè)發(fā)言稿，介紹你校學(xué)生開展小組合作學(xué)習(xí)的情況。

小組合作學(xué)習(xí)	互相幫助， 學(xué)會(huì)傾聽 與他人合作 發(fā)表個(gè)人意見
自主學(xué)習(xí)	制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃 合理安排時(shí)間 獨(dú)立思考 做學(xué)習(xí)的主人 …..

要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，字跡清楚。

2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，加入個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

3. 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear friend,

It’s my honor to share our ways of study with you. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school.

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Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friend,

It’s my honor to share our ways of study with you. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like is to study by ourselves. We can make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most important thing is that we can be the master of our own study.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中用到了一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，有一些句型和短語(yǔ)如：I would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups.；When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together等的運(yùn)用給文章增色不少。