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【題目】 自7月1日起，南京市將執(zhí)行《江蘇省電動(dòng)自行車安全條例》，未戴頭盔騎乘電動(dòng)自行車將屬于交通違法行為。請你根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)和文字提示，以 “Helmet is important” 為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)	2019 年南京市電動(dòng)自行車交通事故死亡原因分析 正確佩戴頭盔的騎乘人員在交通事故中無一死亡
規(guī)定	未戴頭盔將被警告或罰款 20 至 50 元
觀點(diǎn)	針對(duì)新條例談?wù)勀愕目捶?/span>

注意：

1. 參考詞匯：顱腦受損 brain damage；死亡原因 death cause；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Helmet is important!

From 1 July, 2020, people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride e-bicycles. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Helmet is important

From 1 July, 2020, people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride e-bicycles. Otherwise, they will be warned or fined 20 to 50 yuan.

According to a survey on the death causes of people who died from e-bike accidents, 81.6 percent of them died because of brain damage. Among them, 95 percent didn’t wear helmets. On the other hand, for those who wore helmets properly, none of them died. We should learn a lesson from the numbers. It’s necessary for everyone to wear helmets when riding e-bicycles.

In my opinion, it is responsible and wise of Nanjing Government to carry out this new traffic rule.

People will wear helmets in order to avoid being punished. In this way, more people will be protected.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：對(duì)于寫作題考生需認(rèn)真審題，全面了解寫作要求，理清思路，確定短文體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作內(nèi)容。題目要求根據(jù)調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)說明騎乘電動(dòng)自行車時(shí)戴頭盔的重要性，屬于材料類作文，宜采用“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)，以第一、三兩種人稱和一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)三種時(shí)態(tài)展開陳述。