Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本題有1小題；共計(jì)20分）

“廣場(chǎng)舞”square dancing作為一種集體娛樂(lè)健身的活動(dòng)方式越來(lái)越受到中國(guó)大媽的追捧，但其所產(chǎn)生的噪音，或因搶占地盤所引發(fā)的矛盾也越來(lái)越多，請(qǐng)談一談你對(duì)“廣場(chǎng)舞”的看法并提出適當(dāng)建議。

advantage	keep fit
	make new friends
	...
disadvantage	make much noise
	fight for a dancing place
	...
My opinion

注意：(1)短文必須涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；

（3）詞數(shù)：80~100。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Square Dancing

Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China.

Answer 1

【答案】

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Square Dancing

Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China. Not only is it a good way of keeping fit, but also it’s a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends. No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident. However, when people in large number dance to loud music, they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear. What’s worse, some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding.

In my opinion, we shouldn’t dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others’ life. Let’s dance politely and happily.

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【解析】

試題這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了連接詞Not only …but also、However，以及What’s worse，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。