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【題目】【北京市2015年中考英語(yǔ)試題】文段表達(dá)（15分）

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的郵件。郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校為配合北京申辦冬奧會(huì)，倡導(dǎo)人人都做文明中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Peter寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他你認(rèn)為做個(gè)文明中學(xué)生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提示詞語(yǔ)：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy

Dear Peter,

How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.

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Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.

To be a polite middle school student,I think we have to do a lot of things. First, It's important for us to speak politely. We must respect the others. When I meet someone I know ,I often greet him by saying hello to him happliy. We are supposed to be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends.Second, we can't throw rubbish everywhere. We must throw them in the rubbish bins. Littering is not a good habit. Every time I go to the park, I always pick up the litter and put it into the bin. I think if we all do so , the world will be cleaner.Anther important thing is thatwe must follow the rules . There is no doubt that waiting in line is the important rule. I never rush into the bus.Waiting may be a happy thing. I often feel happy when I do something that is better for us. I think being a polite middle school student is proud.

Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：一、話題：做文明中學(xué)生二、要點(diǎn)及時(shí)態(tài)1. 你認(rèn)為做文明中學(xué)生重要的是什么2. 你通常是如何做的3. 你有什么感受時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主三、行文結(jié)構(gòu)1. 明確提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)2. 針對(duì)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)闡述自己日常的文明行為3. 結(jié)尾表達(dá)感受

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文成夾敘夾議，句式豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢。多種句型的應(yīng)用為文章增色。如：It's important for us…, We are supposed to …, if we all do so, when I do something that…,等。