Question

【題目】自開(kāi)展讀書月活動(dòng)以來(lái)，班級(jí)同學(xué)發(fā)生了很大的變化，班會(huì)課上，班長(zhǎng)就同學(xué)們的變化發(fā)表了演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提示，以“Changes of my classmates”為題，寫一篇演講稿。

過(guò)去	1）花很多時(shí)間上網(wǎng)、玩手機(jī)游戲 2）與家人交流太少 3）……
現(xiàn)在	1）養(yǎng)成了讀書的習(xí)慣，每天至少讀書半小時(shí) 2）經(jīng)常向老師尋求建議該讀什么書 3）到目前為止，每個(gè)人已經(jīng)讀了5本書了 4）增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)、開(kāi)闊眼界、獲得快樂(lè)
展望	……

要求：
1）.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）.必須包含所有信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等;
4）.字?jǐn)?shù)在80字左右（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Changes of my classmates
My classmates have changed a lot recently. ……
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Changes of my classmates
My classmates have changed a lot recently.
In the past it took them a long time to surf the Internet through mobile phones every day. They seldom talked with their parents. Now it is a good habit for them to read for half an hour every day. Moreover, they often ask their teachers for advice about some books. So far they each have read five books. Therefore, reading not only broadens their views but also brings them happiness. They often keep in touch with their parents and friends. At the same time, reading makes them relaxed.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.
【解析】這篇作文要求我們介紹開(kāi)展讀書活動(dòng)以來(lái)，班里學(xué)生們的變化，題目中有一個(gè)表格，列舉了學(xué)生們發(fā)生的主要變化，寫作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成短文。其中有兩個(gè)內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生自己來(lái)發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充完整，這需要注意補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容要與全文內(nèi)容密切相關(guān)，并能上下連貫。短文的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)分成兩種情況，介紹過(guò)去時(shí)，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去式；現(xiàn)在的變化用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。短文必須包括表格中的所有要點(diǎn)，并且要注意語(yǔ)言和語(yǔ)法的準(zhǔn)確性，使用一些連詞或者句型，使短文表達(dá)流暢、連貫。