Question

【題目】 假定你是某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華。最近，你校打算為同學(xué)們制作統(tǒng)一的校服，請你給外籍校長威爾遜先生寫一封電子郵件，要點如下：

1. 寫郵件的目的；

2. 對校服布料、款式等提出建議并說明理由。

參考詞匯：校服uniform；款式style

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80-100；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，伹不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wilson,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Dear Mr. Wilson,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, it’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本題是書信作文，要求考生以李華的身份，就學(xué)校打算為同學(xué)們制作統(tǒng)一的校服一事，給校長寫一封郵件。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點寫的是寫信的目的和對校服的布料、款式等提出建議并說明理由。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。