Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

為了迎接2014南京青奧會(huì)，你校在籌備一個(gè)丹麥文化角。假如你是南京青奧示范學(xué)校陽光中學(xué)的李明，請(qǐng)你用英語給丹麥的姊妹學(xué)校寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容必須包括：

表達(dá)你對(duì)南京舉辦青奧會(huì)的喜悅心情；

說明創(chuàng)辦丹麥文化角的目的：介紹丹麥文化，增進(jìn)友誼；

請(qǐng)對(duì)方提供有關(guān)丹麥文化的信息并邀請(qǐng)他們來寧交流。

參考詞匯：

2014 青奧會(huì)the 2014 Youth Olympic Games ; 丹麥 Denmark

文化角 culture corner; 增進(jìn)友誼 build up friendships

注意：

文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/ Madam

I am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing.

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Yours sincerely

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam

I am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing. I am writing to ask for some information about your culture, as our school is preparing a Denmark culture corner to build up friendships between teens.

I’m very proud that our city will be the host of the 2014 Youth Olympic Games. We are planning to introduce your culture and your life. Would you please send some to us? We would be grateful for your help if you do.

At the same time, we are really happy to invite you and your students to come to Nanjing in the summer of 2014. Welcome to Nanjing!

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,寫作中首先要表達(dá)你對(duì)南京舉辦青奧會(huì)的喜悅心情,然后說明創(chuàng)辦丹麥文化角的目的：介紹丹麥文化，增進(jìn)友誼；最后請(qǐng)對(duì)方提供有關(guān)丹麥文化的信息并邀請(qǐng)他們來寧交流。結(jié)合語境可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在及將來時(shí)態(tài),人稱是單數(shù)第一人稱,注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題.寫作中注意適當(dāng)使用連詞,序數(shù)詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。