Question

【題目】書面表達

在學(xué)習(xí)中, 不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容如下：

1. 說明是否存在學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的現(xiàn)象；

2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說明；

3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應(yīng)的建議。

參考詞匯：效率 efficiency

注意：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

How to improve learning efficiency

In my class, _______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】How to improve learning efficiency

In my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.

First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including computer games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?

My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask your teachers or parents for help. They can help you make a plan.

If you follow the suggestion and take action, I believe your learning efficiency will be greatly improved.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。要求以How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。