【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，請你根據(jù)你的筆友李明的基本情況、困惑，給他提一些建議。

基本

情況

出生日期

2002年6月23日

星座

Cancer

個性

活潑外向，注重細(xì)節(jié)。

愛好

熱愛大自然，加入Birdwatching Club 兩年了。

困惑

學(xué)習(xí)

作業(yè)多，睡眠少，上課打瞌睡，壓力大。

情感

父母忙于工作，不時感到孤獨(dú)。

建議

穿白色衣服，因?yàn)?/span>……

……

……

要求：1. 層次清楚，語句通順、意思連貫、書寫規(guī)范；

2. 短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)不得少于90個詞；

4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或地名。

Li Ming is my pen friend. He

【答案】Li Ming is my pen friend. He was born on June 23, 2002. He's a Cancer. Li Ming is outgoing and pays attention to details. He likes nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years. However, as a Grade 9 student, he has some problems. He has too much homework to do. He sleeps less, so he is often sleepy in class. He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams. What’s more, his parents are busy working all day, so he feels lonely from time to time.

I want to offer Li Ming some advice. When he feels stressed, he should wear white clothes, because white can make him feel calm and peaceful. When he studies for exams, he can use yellow stationery, because yellow is the color of wisdom. When he feels lonely, he can have communication with his family or friends and share his worries with them. I hope my advice will be of great value to him.

【解析】

試題首先要認(rèn)真審題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性; 還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。

寫作亮點(diǎn): 本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中使用了pay attention to, however，what’s more，be busy doing, feel lonely，study for exams, share…with…等詞或固定搭配，使上下文意連接緊密, 過渡自然。同時，本文最大亮點(diǎn)是敘事條理、表達(dá)清晰；還使用了時間狀語從句、原因狀語從句等，為文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。

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