Question

【題目】下面是有關中學生睡眠情況的調(diào)查，請據(jù)表格提示寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

項 目	內(nèi) 容
日睡眠量	多數(shù)中學生睡眠不足7小時，有的甚至不足6小時，大大低于8小時的標準。
原 因	1.太多的作業(yè)； 2.家庭、學校過于關注學生成績，而忽視學生的身心健康； 3.多數(shù)學生睡覺前喜歡玩手機，導致休息很晚; 4.……
對 策	1.減少作業(yè)量； 2.睡前遠離數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品； 3......

注意： 1、可以適當增加細節(jié)，使短文連貫、完整；

2、文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總字數(shù)；

3、參考詞匯：調(diào)查survey；數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品digital devices。

According to a survey, we know most middle school students sleep less than 7 hours each night, much less than required.

Answer 1

【答案】

According to a survey, we know most middle school students sleep less than 7 hours each night, much less than required.

First of all, the students have too much homework. Second, schools and parents pay less attention to their sleep. Another important reason is that many students play with their cell phones or iPads before sleeping. This is one of the main reasons for bad sleep. Other reasons include stress and bad moods.

So we must take some ways to stop this. First, less homework should be given to the students by teachers and parents. Second, students need to keep away from digital devices for at least an hour before sleep .Last, more attention should be paid to their health.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)題目提示，我們應該確定本文的時態(tài)應該用一般現(xiàn)在時；注意描述的順序；注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運用。注意句子的順暢，應符合英語的表達習慣。

寫作亮點：文中用了許多固定短語，如less than，pay attention to，keep away from, at least等；表示順序的副詞first of all，second， last能夠很好的連接文章; 文章的句式也較豐富，簡單句、表語從句，被動句等都有所使用。根據(jù)要求，做了恰到好處的發(fā)揮，效果不錯。