【題目】(題文)書(shū)面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面提示,寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文,描述一起謀殺案件。

1.昨晚11點(diǎn)到12點(diǎn)之間,人民路上發(fā)生了一起謀殺案,被害者是一名司機(jī),四十多歲

2.案發(fā)時(shí),有人聽(tīng)到被害者求救。受害人受了刀傷,流血過(guò)多而死。

3.警方已經(jīng)懸賞五萬(wàn)元,以獲取重要線索。

4.如果你有任何信息,請(qǐng)撥打110和警方聯(lián)系。

【答案】Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. A driver was murdered. He was in his forties. At the time of the crime, someone heard him shouting for help.

The victim was attacked with a knife and bled to death as a result. So far, the police have offered a reward of 50,000 yuan for important clues. If you have any information, please call/ contact the police on 110.

【解析】本文屬于材料作文,描述一起謀殺案件。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如take place, at the time of, victim, as a result, so far, clue以及contact。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。

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