Question

【題目】書面表達

86. 如今，中學生的學習時間長，壓力大。上周我班學生對如何減壓、放松進行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。

詞匯：壓力pressure

要求：

（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。

（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮

How Can We Get Relaxed

These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure.

Answer 1

【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。

The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to communicate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.

In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，communicate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。