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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

2014年10月28日上午，濱海港10萬(wàn)噸級(jí)碼頭開(kāi)港試航，濱海人民從此進(jìn)入了大港時(shí)代。小明上星期日去參觀了濱海港。請(qǐng)幫助小明根據(jù)下表中的記錄的要點(diǎn)，以“A trip to Binhai Port (港口) ”為題， 寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文, 介紹他的濱海港之旅。必須包括全部要點(diǎn)，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

When	28 October, 2014
Where	Binhai Port
Who	my English teacher and some of my classmates
What to do	meet at the school gate at eight o’clock, take a bus there
	watch the ships sailing
	take photos, take a boat trip
	have some sea food for lunch
	come back home later in the afternoon

A trip to Binhai Port

Binhai Port was open to shipping for the first time on October 28, 2014.

I had an unforgettable trip to Binhai Port last Sunday.

I hope you can have a trip there soon, too. I am sure you will enjoy yourself.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

A trip to Binhai Port

Binhai Port was open to shipping for the first time on October 28, 2014.

I had an unforgettable trip to Binhai Port last Sunday. I went with my English teacher and some of my classmates. We met at the school gate at eight o’clock, then we took a bus to the port. It took us about one and a half hours to get there. When we got there, we took many photos first. We couldn’t wait to take a boat trip. We were all excited to see the ships sailing. We ate some sea food for lunch at a restaurant. It was so delicious. We came back home later in the afternoon. We all felt very tired. But it was really an exciting trip.

I hope you can have a trip there soon, too. I am sure you will enjoy yourself.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。在寫(xiě)作前首先要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。

再次根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。根據(jù)所給材料可知本文主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：該文語(yǔ)句流暢，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了題目中的每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。還多次使用了連接詞and、but以及固定句型如It took us about one and a half hours to get there.，We couldn’t wait to take a boat trip.等等，都為文章增色不少。