Question

【題目】寫作

中秋之夜的雨水，使我們失去了賞月的機(jī)會(huì)。對(duì)于一個(gè)喜歡下雨的人來(lái)說(shuō),它的到來(lái)卻是一份意外的驚喜。九年級(jí)一班就此展開了討論。不同的同學(xué)有著各自不同的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容向大家介紹一下一班同學(xué)的情況，并談一談自己的看法或做法。

不同觀點(diǎn)	理 由	你的觀點(diǎn)
喜 歡	1.聽(tīng)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，放松自己； 2.與父母待在一起，…… 3.讀書也是不錯(cuò)的選擇，因?yàn)椤��?/span>	1……. 2……
不喜歡	1.不能外出，感覺(jué)無(wú)聊； 2.父母要求完成更多的作業(yè)，所以……

要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

2.必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.詞數(shù)在100左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

4.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。

Class 1, Grade 9 students have a discussion about what to do on rainy days. _____________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently Class 1, Grade 9 students have a discussion about what to do on rainy days. Different students have different views. Some students like them very much. They think they can listen to music to relax themselves on rainy days. They can also spend time with their parents. At the same time, reading books is also a good choice, because reading can increase our knowledge and learn the world well without going out. However, others dislike them, because they think on rainy days they can't go out, when they have nothing to do, they will feel bored. And their parents will ask them to do more homework, so they prefer the weekends which have no rain. In my opinion, I don’t mind whether it rains or not. I often help my mother do some chores after finishing my homework on rainy days. I think my parents are busy with their work and the housework. They are too tired, so I should help them.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用信息提示寫作的話題作文。要求根據(jù)信息提示，以下雨的周末如何度過(guò)為話題，寫一篇短文。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文要點(diǎn)明確，語(yǔ)言精練。層次分明。不同要點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)使用的句式也不一樣。語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，復(fù)合句的使用so they prefer the days which have no rain. I don’t mind whether it rains or not.豐富了文章的內(nèi)容。