Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分） 根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不用抄在答題紙上。

假期即將來臨，你一定有許多計劃。假如你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封信，談?wù)勀慵倨谏�活（至少三個方面）的計劃及理由，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear John, The winter vacation is coming. ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear John,

The winter vacation is coming. It’s time for everyone to make plans. Let me share mine with you.

First of all, I’ll take a trip to Xi’an to visit my uncle and aunt. I’ll do more exercises, because it is good for my health. I’ll go skating with friends. I’ll also take the great chance to stay at home to read some books and go to the movies.

Besides, I’ll learn something important. So I’ll take piano lessons and learn to make fruit salad. I think I’ll learn a lot as well as have a good time in the coming vacation.

How about your winter vacation? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，以李華的名字，給美國筆友John寫一封信，談?wù)勀慵倨谏�活的計劃及理由。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般將來時。人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It’s time for sb to do sth，It is…，I’ll do…以及 I think…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，充分利用題目中所提供的短語。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了寫信目的是要分享自己的寒假計劃，接下來介紹自己的寒假計劃：看望叔叔和嬸嬸、做鍛煉、讀書、學(xué)習(xí)鋼琴等，最后期望收到John的回信。此處share with, take a trip to, take the chance to do sth, have a good time, look forward to doing sth等這些詞組的運用讓文章增色不少,連詞First of all, because, so, besides, as well as的運用讓文章連貫，銜接自然。