Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你的美國筆友 Rick 想了解你最喜歡的老師的情況，請介紹弄初三以來最喜歡的以為老師，談?wù)勊�（他）留給你的深刻印象，給你鼓勵和幫助，同時表達(dá)你繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)，回報師恩的心情。開頭已給出。

要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；

2.可以參考下面提示詞，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.詞數(shù)：80 詞左右。短文開頭部分己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Rick,

I’d like to tell you something about my favorite teacher,Mr.Wang.He is my favorite teacher, who works as English teacher . He is taller than other teachers and has short hair. He always dress a suit when he comes to teach us .
I remembered when I met him for the first time , I was afraid . Because he seems to a little serious . So at first I didn't like him . However ,as time went by , I found he is kind, patient ,helpful,and humorous . All of us feel very happy in his class . He always makes his classes interesting , so we all likes his class and never feel bored. Especially , my English is very poor initially , I felt so self-abased . But he gave me a lot of help and advice on English and we always play together as brothers . Finally, I made great progress . Now , I feel very confident in English . That's so marvelous.
As far as I'm concerned , he has a good knowledge of teaching . We all feel free at his class . I hope he can go on teaching us next year and he will be happy,healthy and successful.

I will study hard and get good grades.

【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I’d like to do，the first time，be afraid，at first，as time went by，all of us，a lot of，play together as brothers，as far as，go on doing等。而He is my favorite teacher, who works as English teacher./ I remembered when I met him for the first time , I was afraid./ He always makes his classes interesting , so we all likes his class and never feel bored./ As far as I'm concerned , he has a good knowledge of teaching ./ I hope he can go on teaching us next year and he will be happy, healthy and successful.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。