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【題目】書面表達

親愛的同學們，初中生活即將結(jié)束！在此離別之際，恰逢《中學生英語》征稿，請你以“A(n) (Lucky/Unusual/Exciting/Proud/Regretful(遺憾的)/……)Thing”為題，簡要描述一件你親身經(jīng)歷的、印象深刻的事情，并談談你從這件事中所獲得的啟示。

要求：1．寫短文前，請用一個恰當?shù)男稳菰~補全下面的標題，所用形容詞可以從上面括號中選取，也可以另外選擇；2．語句通順，表達準確，內(nèi)容連貫；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名；4．詞數(shù)：80～100詞。短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

A(n) Thing

In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.

Answer 1

【答案】

A Regretful Thing

In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.

Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face. Not until when he moved to another city with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.

The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regrets.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己的親身經(jīng)歷，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。