Question

【題目】假如你是李華，作為活動(dòng)主持人，你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Smith 先生來(lái)參加本周末學(xué)校開(kāi)展的“英語(yǔ)戲劇展示”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)函，告訴他本次活動(dòng)的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示詞語(yǔ):wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?

What are you going to do on the show?

What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend. ______________________________

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We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于話(huà)題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語(yǔ)戲劇展示活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。