Question

【題目】（黑龍江省龍東地區(qū)2015年中考）圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察下列四幅圖片，展開合理想象，寫一篇短文。

提示詞：thief小偷

要求：1. 話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。2. 詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間。

3. 要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

An unusual day

Tom and Tim are good friends . One day, they went to a supermarket for shopping. Suddenly they found a man stealing things in the supermarket.

After that, the thief left the supermarket. They followed him. The thief went to a bus stop and read newspaper there. The two boys called the police at once. A few minutes later, a policewoman came and they told her the whole thing. Then they caught the thief together. The policewoman said, "You are good boys!" Tom and Tim were very happy.

It was an unusual day for them.

【解析】

試題分析：通過觀察可知這四副圖描述的故事是兩個(gè)男孩發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)小偷在超市偷東西，然后告訴了警察，小偷被抓住了。根據(jù)主要內(nèi)容可知用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文敘述完整，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚。Suddenly，find sb doing sth,發(fā)現(xiàn)某人正在做某事，After that, A few minutes later,短語的應(yīng)用使文章更有節(jié)奏感，可讀性強(qiáng)。