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【題目】（題文）書面表達(dá)

關(guān)于萬圣節(jié)，你還知道哪些信息？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，和同學(xué)分享分享萬圣節(jié)的相關(guān)趣聞。

●萬圣節(jié)是秋天的節(jié)日，每一年美國(guó)人都慶祝它

●它不僅是教堂的節(jié)日而且是孩子們的節(jié)日。

●每年秋天蔬菜成熟可以食用的時(shí)候，孩子們就會(huì)挑出大個(gè)兒的橙色南瓜。然后在南瓜上刻上一張臉，把一根點(diǎn)燃的蠟燭放在里面。看起來就好像有人在向南瓜外面張望。這些燈就叫做“jacko'lanterns”，意思也就是“杰克的燈”。

寫作要求：語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Halloween is an autumn holiday and Americans celebrate it every year.It means “holy evening，” and it comes every October 31.However, it is not really a church holiday, it is a holiday for children mainly.

Every autumn, when the vegetables are ready to eat, children pick large orange pumpkins.Then they cut faces in the pumpkins and put a burning candle inside, which looks as if there is someone looking out of the pumpkins! Those lanterns are called “jacko'lanterns”， which means lanterns of Jack.

【解析】

本文是材料作文，也是提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示介紹萬圣節(jié)。首先確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)，本文介紹節(jié)日，可知本文的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。本文的漢語提示就是本文的提綱，寫作時(shí)，內(nèi)容要包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，可根據(jù)提綱適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱，本文給詞的要點(diǎn)就是提綱，把要點(diǎn)中的重要短語翻譯成英文：（1）萬圣節(jié)是秋天的節(jié)日，每一年美國(guó)人都慶祝它Halloween is an autumn holiday and Americans celebrate it every year. （2）它在11月31日，它不僅是教堂的節(jié)日而且是孩子們的節(jié)日。October 31. It is not really a church holiday, it is a holiday for children mainly.（3）每年秋天蔬菜成熟可以食用的時(shí)候，孩子們就會(huì)挑出大個(gè)兒的橙色南瓜。然后在南瓜上刻上一張臉，把一根點(diǎn)燃的蠟燭放在里面�？雌饋砭秃孟裼腥嗽谙蚰瞎贤饷鎻埻�。這些燈就叫做“jacko'lanterns”，意思也就是“杰克的燈”。Every autumn, when the vegetables are ready to eat, children pick large orange pumpkins. They cut faces in the pumpkins and put a burning candle inside, which looks as if there is someone looking out of the pumpkins! Those lanterns are called “jacko'lanterns”， which means lanterns of Jack.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，再閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，主謂一致等是否有錯(cuò)誤。