【題目】書面表達(dá)

16 Write a review(評(píng)論) of the following story in about 120 words The review has to include the following points.(閱讀下面的故事,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示,寫出一篇約120詞的評(píng)論).

1The title of your review.(你撰寫的評(píng)論的標(biāo)題.)

2Your ideas), examples and the reasons for unhappiness and happiness in the story.(你歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點(diǎn),舉例子并說明原因.)

3Your ideas of happiness, examples for happiness in your daily life.(歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀點(diǎn),并舉例說明.)

4Your conclusion about happiness.(關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論.)

5The words you may use.(你可能用到的詞) be satisfied with(對(duì)……滿意) desire n.欲望 contentment 知足 the key(關(guān)鍵) to happiness

A long time ago, in a rich and beautiful country there lived an unhappy king He slept badly and didn't feel like eating He often cried for no reason This made the queen and his people worried So they called a doctor to examine himBut he found nothing wrong with his bodyHe said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wearThat would make him happy

The prime minister was called to the palace But when they explained the king's situation to him, he said,"Although I have a lot of power, it doesn't make me happy I'm always worried about losing my power"

Then the king's banker came to say, I'm afraid I'm not happy either I have a lot of wealth, but I'm always worried about losing money Someone tries to steal my money Next, the palace singer was called to say "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others I can't be free"

Finally, the top general was told to go out to find a happy man He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone Everyone seemed to have their own problems, and no one was truly happy Just as he wanted to give up he saw a poor man on the street He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself The general went to him and said,"What makes you so happy? You have no power money, or fame" The man said"I have everything I want and I don't want what I can't have So I'm happy, and my song comes from the happiness in my heart ""Can you give your shirt to me, I need it, "said the general"What shirt I don' t have any shirts"answered the man

【答案】My Thoughts about Happiness

Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.

What can always make me happy?Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.

All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.

【解析】

這是一篇要求寫評(píng)論的文章,根據(jù)下面的故事中的相關(guān)信息寫出一篇約120詞的評(píng)論。所提供的材料中列舉了撰寫的評(píng)論的標(biāo)題。主要從:(1)歸納的關(guān)于故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點(diǎn),舉例子并說明原因。(2)歸納你在日常生活中關(guān)于幸福的觀點(diǎn),并舉例說明;(3)關(guān)于幸福的結(jié)論。這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。注意評(píng)論中必須包含材料上的故事情節(jié),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

For example,the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如,富人不快樂,因?yàn)樗麄兒ε率ュX,而窮人真正快樂是因?yàn)樗麑?duì)自己所擁有的感到滿足。

句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 總之,不要想你不能擁有的東西。

句子what you can't have. think about的賓語。

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