Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

學(xué)校“男神女神墻”上榜人物評選活動正在火熱進(jìn)行中，請你推薦一個(gè)心目中的人選(可以是同學(xué)、老師或自己)。

內(nèi)容包括：

1、姓名、年齡。

2、體育愛好、飲食習(xí)慣(各舉至少一個(gè)例子)。

3、喜愛的(或任教的)學(xué)科。

注：書寫工整、卷面整潔，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及班級。(60詞左右)

Hello, everyone, I have a right person(合適人選) for this “wall(墻)”.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Hello, everyone, I have a right person(合適人選) for this “wall(墻)”. She is my classmate, and her name is Lucy. She is thirteen years old. She is good at playing the guitar. She also likes playing basketball. After school, she often play it with her friends. Her favorite subject is English, because she thinks it is interesting. She often helps us learn English.She has a healthy eating habit. She likes eating vegetable and fruit. She is outgoing and she is always friendly to us. So we all love her.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己心目中一個(gè)男神或女神。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Her name is…，She is…, She also likes…, Her favorite subject is..., because she thinks…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意根據(jù)提綱要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中要注意主謂一致。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我心目中女神的名字，接下來介紹她的特長和愛好：音樂、體育、最喜歡的學(xué)科、性格，最后表達(dá)我們都喜歡她。此處be good at, play the guitar, like doing sth, play basketball, help sb do sth, be friendly to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。