Question

【題目】 “傳遞愛心，服務(wù)他人”是文明社會(huì)所倡導(dǎo)的理念。獅子會(huì)(the Lions)就是一個(gè)以此為宗旨的國際性服務(wù)團(tuán)體。楊敏是獅子會(huì)的一名成員，多年來她一直樂于助人。請根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇短文，向�？�的English World欄目投稿，簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和打算。

	Ready to help others
	Yang Min ◆help others for years ◆go to the old people's home twice a month (cut hair. wash clothes, do some cleaning) ◆offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
	◆your opinion …… ◆your plan ……

要求：
1）短文內(nèi)容必須包含表格所提供的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；
3）詞數(shù)：80 - 100（短文開頭已給出，僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）。
短文開頭：From time to time，we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most.……

Answer 1

【答案】From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has been helping others for many years. She goes to the old peopled home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.
Fin deeply moved by her story. Fm going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. What’s more, I’ll ask my parents and more friends to join me. Small action can make a big difference. Let’s help those who need help!
【解析】作文內(nèi)容是簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和打算．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1.簡要介紹楊敏的事跡：幫助他人很多年，一個(gè)月去養(yǎng)老院一次，雨天免費(fèi)提供雨傘或雨衣。2.你的觀點(diǎn)和打算。