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【題目】短文寫作

78.“中國核潛艇之父”黃旭華院士，是央視王牌節(jié)目“開講啦”開播以來最年長的演 講者。上周五下午，全校師生觀看完該視頻后，都眼含熱淚。

為了學習英雄的先進事跡，請你根據提示內容，以 “Huang Xuhua — the Father of

China’s Nukes”為題，寫一篇人物介紹。 寫作要點：

1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但為了祖國強盛，放棄成為一名醫(yī)生的機會，學習建造核潛艇；

2. 在當時條件艱苦的環(huán)境下，他專心于核潛艇的研究和建造；

3. 為了保護國家安全，他曾隱姓埋名工作，30 年不為人所知，現(xiàn)雖年過 90 仍奮斗不止；

4. 他的行為向我們詮釋了什么是對國家和人民的熱愛。

寫作要求：

1. 文章不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

2. 文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，必要時可作適當發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù) 80 個以上，文章的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總字數(shù)。 參考詞匯：

核潛艇 nuke; 國家安全 national security; 隱姓埋名 conceal one’s identity

Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes

Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about

Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.

We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.

Answer 1

【答案】Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes

Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about

Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.

He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.

To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesn’t stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)

His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.

We were all inspired by his heroic deeds

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。根據要點提示，寫一篇人物介紹。根據材料內容可知本文主要是用一般過去時態(tài)來寫，人稱為第三人稱。所給出的寫作要點比較具體，并給出了作文的開頭和結尾，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。寫作中要用到的重點詞組有：in order to為了, give up放棄, try to do sth.設法做某事, concentrate on doing sth.專心做某事 used to do sth過去常常做某事, be unknown for不為人所知。