Question

【題目】當(dāng)代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡單》一書中，用自己的點滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括以下方面：

1. 你認為幸福是什么？

2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時間、地點、過程與感受）。

3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。

寫作要求：

1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；

2. 卷面干凈整潔；

3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；

4. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My Happiness

After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

【解析】

幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達有：happiness is always around you 幸�？傇谀闵磉�；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。總體來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。