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【題目】目前，許多中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據下面內容寫一篇短文。

贊成者的觀點	1. 能夠學得更好，考試考得更好，上更好的高中； 2. 避免花太多時間看電視、玩游戲。
反對者的觀點	1. 學生需要時間休息； 2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。
你的觀點	1. 課堂上好好學就足夠了，補課不必要； 2. 課后可以自己......

注意：1. 表達清楚，語法通順，上下文連貫；

2. 必須包括提示的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮，至少兩點；

3. 詞數：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；

4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.

Some people think that

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.

Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.

But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.

As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.

【解析】

整體這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班，對此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班贊同者的觀點。第三段要寫中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班反對者的觀點。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點。

寫作之前要1.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？2.確定文章類型，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？3.確定時態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫下關鍵詞、短語、句型。5.列出提綱和段落，并運用適當的句型和過渡詞銜接。6.根據提綱和段落結構句型及關鍵詞句完成文章。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。They also believe that···。If they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.來增加了文章的亮點。