Question

【題目】書面表達

健康的生活習(xí)慣是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)該是怎樣的呢？請根據(jù)以下的信息提示，寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容：1、健康飲食；

2、早睡早起，不熬夜；

3、參加運動，強身健體。

要求：

1、必須包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2、80詞左右；

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Healthy habit

I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?

First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。