Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

國(guó)慶假期即將來(lái)臨，你將迎來(lái)一個(gè)輕松愉快的假期。對(duì)如何度過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的假期，你有哪些建議和想法?請(qǐng)寫出來(lái)與大家分享。

Some ideas	plan the time carefully keep a balance between…and… …
	play with friends do different sports do some reading …

要求：

1. 文章必須包括所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

3. 詞數(shù)：90詞左右（開(kāi)頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

The National Day is coming. We will have lots of time to enjoy ourselves.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The National Day is coming. We will have lots of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do, and try hard to keep a balance between work and play. In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do different sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do some reading. It can help get us prepared for the new term. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，要求寫出自己的假期安排。。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，把握寫作的大致方向，列舉寫作要點(diǎn)1. 假期宗旨: 精心安排，勞逸結(jié)合2. 具體活動(dòng)：play with friends， do different sports， do some reading 3. 活動(dòng)目的：have a wonderful holiday。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。運(yùn)用了大量的詞組plenty of, enjoy oneself, had better, make a list, for example, play with, do sports, It is…for…to do sth, between …and…, do some reading, prepare for, have a wonderful holiday復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用“We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.”可看出小作者的寫作基本功非常扎實(shí)。