Question

【題目】書面表達

針對目前中學(xué)生壓力大的心理狀態(tài)，你們班就“中學(xué)生的煩惱”進行了一次調(diào)查。請根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語寫一篇調(diào)查報告，以便在班會上進行學(xué)習(xí)交流。

要求：1. 報告中須涉及到表格中所有的提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 80—100 詞，報告的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入要求詞數(shù)。

We did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under.

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Answer 1

【答案】We did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under.

Half of the students in our class think there’s too much homework. They don’t have much time for fun. Most of them worry about their exam results. A few students think their biggest problem is that they can’t get their parents’ understanding.

As for the ways to deal with these problems, most of them choose to talk to their friends. Some would rather listen to music. A few of them think talking to parents, reading books and playing sports are all good ways to help them forget about their

problems.

【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如too much homework，have much time for fun，most of them，worry about，get their parents’ understanding，deal with，talk to their friends，would rather，listen to music，a few of等。而Half of the students in our class think there’s too much homework. A few students think their biggest problem is that they can’t get their parents’ understanding.等多種從句句式的運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。