Question

【題目】書面表達

Joy是“Heart To Heart”電臺的主持人，是同學們的“知心姐姐”。昨天，她收到一名九年級學生Simon的信，向她訴說了很多苦惱。假如你是Joy，請你回復他的來信。

Simon’s problems	Joy’s suggestions
學習英語有困難，害怕英語考試不及格。	要有自信，為下一次考試做好充分的準備。
朋友少，不知找誰傾訴。	多交朋友，跟同學和老師分享快樂、分擔煩惱。
作業(yè)多，不得不熬夜到很晚。	自擬……(至少一點)

要求：1．圍繞以上表格內容進行合理表述；

2．所表述的內容必須包含表中的所有方面；

3．100-120詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出。（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Simon,

Thanks for telling me about your problems!

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Wish you good luck!

Yours sincerely,

Joy

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Simon,

Thanks for telling me about your problems! It is true that every student is very nervous before a test. As you say, you are worried about your English test because you have trouble learning English and are afraid of failing the test. Be more confident, then you will smile at any problem. Get ready for the next test, I think you will pass the test. I know you have few friends. When you have worries,you don’t know who you can talk to about them. In my opinion, don’t close your mind! Open your heart to everyone and try to make more friends . If you do so, you will share your happiness with your friends and teachers. As for homework, you say you have too much home work, and you have to stat up every night. I think you should plan your time well. If you do so, you still have to stay up,you can talk to your teacher about it.

Wish you good luck!

Yours sincerely,

Joy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹給李湖提建議的的文章，題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前要根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱。確定句子的時態(tài)。關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，要適當表達自己觀點。寫作中要注意語意通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連詞。

寫作亮點：涵蓋所有要點、結構規(guī)范、條理清楚、邏輯嚴密，詞匯豐富。文中多次使用主從復合句如：①When you have worries,you don’t know who you can talk to about them.②If you do so, you will share your happiness with your friends and teachers. ③As for homework, you say you have too much home work, and you have to stat up every night.為文章增色不少。