Question

【題目】根據(jù)下面提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于我國(guó)古代詩(shī)人(poet)屈原的短文(詞數(shù)40左右)。

1.擅長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)詩(shī)，作品很多。

2.給楚王(King Chu)提了很多建議，反而被投入監(jiān)獄(prison)。

3.最后對(duì)國(guó)家失望，投江而死。

4.人們每年過(guò)端午節(jié)來(lái)紀(jì)念屈原。

Answer 1

【答案】Qu Yuan was a famous poet who wrote many famous poems. He gave the King Chu a lot of good advice, but was put into prison. He was so disappointed that he threw himself into the river. In memory of Qu Yuan, people have the Dragon Boat Festival every year.

【解析】

本篇習(xí)作成功地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，表達(dá)順暢，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。a lot of、put into、throw into、in memory of和every year等固定短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使得文章很生動(dòng)。同時(shí)，結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句He was so disappointed that he threw himself into the river.的使用，豐富了短文的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，亮點(diǎn)突出，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。