Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)李華是你的同班同學(xué)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示及要求，用英語寫一篇題為" My Classmate"的短文．

提示：1．他個(gè)子高，長相英俊，成績(jī)優(yōu)秀，擅長運(yùn)動(dòng)；

2．他樂于助人（舉一個(gè)例子）；

3．對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)．

要求：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名；2．詞數(shù)80左右．

My Classmate

__________．

Answer 1

【答案】My Classmate

Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend. He is tall and handsome. His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams. He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. He is ready to help others. He often helps me with my English. Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother. I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much. I hope we will be good friends forever.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹你的同班同學(xué)。主要從1．他個(gè)子高，長相英俊，成績(jī)優(yōu)秀，擅長運(yùn)動(dòng)；2．他樂于助人（舉一個(gè)例子）；3．對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)。這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. 他也擅長運(yùn)動(dòng)，因?yàn)樗�認(rèn)為健康很重要。

句子because he thinks health is very important.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother. 去年，他幫助一個(gè)迷路的十歲男孩找到了他的母親。

句子who lost his way find his mother.是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。